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The Clay Assassin

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NOTE: I'm sorry for the mess ups I made, this is the actual working video. I sure hope you enjoy it no matter how annoying it was at first.


Two claymen gets attacked by an assassin, will they survive?

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the clay assassin

is to crap come one you can do better jeez

The Clay Assassin

wow, that was pretty good for an fbf.
other than that fact that the audio was kinda hard to hear, this was great!

Pretty good

good start, if i may leave a suggestion, try to see if you can speak a little more clearly. But it was good anyway. Also, you could just ignore them, which is probably what i would do, but if you want people to stop saying your ripping of knox, then you might want to just redesign the characters so they don't look like knox's. Just a suggestion though, it's your stuff, not mine.

Great Clay movie

But i could barely hear what they were saying half the time.

Wasn't half bad

Overall this was good, quite enjoyable.

The story was simple, but funny and well put together.
The movements were pretty good, when I saw the clay people. I was kind of expecting the wobble side to side, kind of walking which I dislike. I apologise for that judgement and I take it back.
The voice acting was done well and was very clear, though I am not a fan of the strange squeaky voice.

Things to work on:
Too much camera movement, was very shakey and dodgey at times.
Some of the movements were very sudden and could use some more frames in-between. (Is always better too add too many frames than not enough)
Perhaps some lip sync.
Better camera quality.
Maybe some better lighting.

(Oh and if you give me the "Knox doesn't do this and that" excuse, it's not valid as I am not a very big fan of him anyways)

So overall good job, keep it up and good luck in future animations.

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Uploaded
May 21, 2008
5:09 PM EDT