This is my 1st flash animation, so please leave comments on how i can better myself. This was made in only a couple of days and so the animation is more of an animatic really. I plan to use Flash a lot more and hopefully will be able to produce better and better animations as time goes on so .........................
.................... enjoy
cheers
not bad
thought the character looked nice and the room scene was pretty cheeky, though got to be honest here didnt really like the start. personally thats the only thing I'd really change though on the whole not a bad effort for your 1st piece in flash.
a good first flash
I my self have never even made a flash so i must say that i think this was good for being your first one =) i liked the idea even though the script could have been a litle more develloped, the animation was OK.. so keep on trying! best of luck mate! =)
It's a start
It was short enough to keep it enjoyable and the animation was drawn well. I expect that your drawing skills will only improve over time. I liked the amount of detail put into each frame. There was enough going on, but not distracting. I thought the animation was a little slow. Perhaps more fps would help.
Shows promise
This shows a lot of promise. The art quality is pretty decent, it's imaginitve (SP :P) and pretty well done.
The biggest suggestion I can make is to make more frames for your movements. When he turns is head on the pillow, it's very jarring, and I would have liked to see the little stick-dude move more when he was climbing down the dresser.
Keep it up!