good beginer stuff mate.
This wasnt really too bad at all.
Sounds will help the hilarity of it all!
Atrocious spelling tho!
Keep at it champ looking forward to the next installment.
Author Comments
this is one of my first flashes... it is more of a cartoon than a movie.
but im not that good at ''movement animating''
and it was inspired by the game max paine without the narrator:P
if you can give me some tips and tricks it would be much appreciated:D
remember i am still a trainee animator:P
enjoy the movie
lol liked it
it was pretty funny i hope it passes judgement and you can make a part two!!!
Nya nya nya nya nyaha!
Alright, I'm half asleep, hungry, and pretty much brain dead right now, so bear with me.
-its good that you acknowledged that there are no sounds, or voice actors, but if you see flaws on your own, it's a good idea to fix them. Because leaving flaws behind will make you more probable to get used to not fixing them when doing flashes.
-ran smooth for a first timer, that's good.
-I think the killer needs to look the part. Maybe make him look buff, with some sort of creepy-ness about him. Unless you intended the killer to look like a kid, which could make good for a plot in the future.
-maybe its possible in a way, to narrate what's happening while the victims are being stalked. Maybe have some text below, describing more detailed parts of a scene. Like, "he took out a knife, about 4 inches long, with a slight hook at the end. He drew closer, examining where to draw blood from his precious victim."
See, that can even expand your story to, making it longer as the detailed proses works its place.
Okay, I'm done righting my review for the night. I hope this helps in your conquest for your murder story.
deathmaks responds:
the killer is not a kid:P but he is verry skinny thats like the idea.
you dont have to be all machoman to lift a knife or throw some
good punches... and he is like 18-20 that was the main idea anyways:P
hahahahaha!
No sounds. No music Very gay. And bad graphix&animation. Hahahahaha ^_^
Not bad.
But on the other han, I don't really know. It needed voice acting and sounds. At least sounds to elevate the animation. The drawing style was quite harsh but that can be forgiven. There were some points where the animation felt better than what it was on the overall scale. Perhaps you need to practise just a litle bit more and then you're good to go. All the way.