Pretty good story...
I think it was a good story and well it did have a message but i think the message was only like..i don't know how say what i mean very well but it seemed like the message was half sent to the audience? That's the only way i can word it lol I'm too tired to think. I think it was because the girl was believing in herself way too quick for things she was doing...I mean just like that. She didn't really learn anything except believe in herself but i didn't she how she learnt all of this. it's like some parts or a lot of parts were missing or should be put in. Sorry if this dosent make sence lol but good work and keep it up!
*DA*