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dizzy penguin IMPROVED

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very basic collect and avoid game aimed at 3 to 7 year olds
made this for a college assignment, any suggestions are appreciated.

this is the improved version taking into account the reviews on the first .

my first ever game so go easy please.

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it was alright.

it could have been really good if y ou put more timei n it. :[

Simple

Simple and straight forward game the deals with collection on board with a spinning obstacle in the center and 4 others (one on each side). I enjoyed for the time and although it won't be winning any awards good job on it, my only suggestion is work on the ice blocks to show that you want to stay away from them, maybe make them look spiky or something to emphasize that you want to stay away, also maybe some sort of power-up if at all possible would draw more people in. Good job otherwise 3.4/5

needs improvement

it's okay, but it needs levels to make it more playable.

Pringell responds:

well this games just going to be handed in for my assignment like this because ive got like two days left to finish it and all the theory but as soon as i have spare time ill take everyones suggestions and try my best to improve more until its the best game i can make :) give me time and i hope you enjoy what i come up with :D

Pringell

has potential

Add a timer and set a goal like a certain number of fish to catch or a points total , and you would have a pretty decent level based game. Maybe throw in a walrus to chase the penguin around every now and then.

Ehh

Not too shabby for a first timer...no real explanation of how many fish you need or that winter is just the 1 countdown. maybe add in a month system with the colder months needing more fish or less fish are on the screen.