yup, not bad

I can see your action has improved plenty in that year. There's still more you can do though.

All those repeats really are irritating. I saw the action once, you don't need to constantly labour the point by showing it to us another two, three times. On a similar note all the constant zooming in and out is a little distracting too.

The big credits are a bit over the top for a stick figure fight. Much better to save those for when you're doing something a bit more than using pivot figures. that could be a personal preference of mine, but I always think it's cool to understate things, rather than go over the top with hype.

Still a bit too slow. You've got a lot of slow-motion shots, but sometimes it's hard to tell where one ends and realtime action begins. You need more definition.

As for some real plus points? limbs are moving much more naturally now, that's great. The moves you've decided to use are more dynamic. Somersaults and highkicks are much more lively.

Thanks for letting me know about this (:

pretty good

the repeated moves were a little annoying

Decent stick fight

It was ok for a stick battle the animation was decent, one thing i did notice was the "TEXT" bubbles could be more refined such as a better font somehow, but other then that the little animation was notbad.

Entertaining stick battle.

~X~

Not bad, but...

The constant replays annoyed me, it was like a record that kept jumping... Not a bad first attempt though, well done.

Not bad but...

Seriously, no one wants to see the same moves three times, it's like I've watched that sequence 3 times yet I only clicked play once. In future I would recommend only doing that once or twice within a flash, and only with major hits and only show the same move once more. 3 just ruins a good thing.
In all, it wasn't that bad, could've been smoother but alright anyhow.