really bad

I did not like this animation, get better and show us more
BAD:
not smoothed or eased at all, way too choppy. start the movement slow, and then move it faster , than slower like: |-|--|---|----|----|---|--|-| not |--|--|--|--|--|--|--|

he didn't walk, he slid. he also didn't go through doors, he just disappeared

story was bad, he just decides to go to a gay bar and kill people! I did see that there was a boss-looking character, but you didn't make it known whether or not he was a boss or just another gay guy.

no one fought back and it was badly drawn.

GOOD:
you left yourself in a place where there could easily be a sequal where you could show your improvement in animation.

lots' o' madness guns. from all different madness episodes

you'll do better next time

LoLec :D

Kamo votoval sem 5ku a hodilo to z 2.80 na 2.83 (+0.032) :)

hmmmm

the animation was ok but it needs a bit of work on it and other then that the storyline could use a little more work like y the hell would he ramdomly go to a gay bar o.O but other then that it was pretty cool man good work :D

it wasnt that bad

the storyline was a bit crappy though.
why a gay bar? lol.

but i must admit that the animation was okay but it could be smoother.

good

it was funny when he killed the two gays