that was bitchin'

That wasnt all that great

Meh

This was rather boring, and the sound effects became annoying quickly. The typing sounds made me want to shoot myself in the wrist..

As someone else has already stated, it helps to have some kind of drawing ability before animating. Develop some sort of style or something. I made comics for a long time before I got into animating, maybe you should try something like that first and get familiar with what you want to do, then move on to more complicated things.

One last thing. Stating it is one thing, but don't ever use age as an excuse to try and get sympathy from reviewers of any kind. It just makes you look bad. Let people know you're a beginner, but accept what they have to say regardless. Generally if neither party is an asshole you'll benefit from their criticism.

U got 10 stars, but this IS crap.

You only got 10 stars and even a 5 because of the ending music.lol.

Hmmm

im not going to blam this or anything, but it was quite a good idea. Not the worst noob cartoon ive seen, its actually one of the better ones. Improve the art work and i think you'll get known pretty soon round here.

Interesting Idea but...

you really don't have the drawing skills to show how things can become not ugly. Rather boring just reading words aswell. You could have either put music in it are spoke the words. Make the flash experience a less boring one for us! Good concept but you don;t have the talent and it is very boring.

-GS-