Please

Don't ever use pivot again, for one its laggy and just terrible and bad. Buy flash or don't even bother...

Demo's go in alpha's and no preloader?

It lagged a bit because of the fact of no preloader, demo's also go in Newgrounds alphas just to remind you. There was no sound or color, not really interactive, and the gravity for the characters are messed up, a ninja can't just stand on the ceiling with nothing there. Add stuff to it like you care! The characters let alone were just sticks...that must've been hard, seriously, I know you can do better by picking up the paint tool to at least appeal the viewers.

i realize its unfinished but,

-you definitely need a preloader. it kept glitching and lagging almost the whole flash.
-add some sound from the Audio Portal, it makes your flash seem more quality-ish than having no sound at all
-I'm going to blam this...please finish and repost it for a higher rating

(need help?)
cardboard

Well,

I give you a three for effort, but I didnt get any laughs.
Stick figures are alright but only if you put the effort into them to make the toon interesting, backgrounds, sound, maybe animation a bit smoother.