This was very good
Wow I must say that this was very impressive I like the "DARK" touch you gave this the content was really good, the music/sound seemd slightly distorted but that was not too much of an issue, also adding some subtitles wouldnt hurt.
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The music seemed low or distorted, subtitles are not often needed but sometimes they do help, and sometimes they make it kinda neat with that extra feature so maybe adding some subtitles would be a plus. So the looping in the flash is what getts kind of anoying but thats actualy an easy fix, as simple as adding a stop action code, done from your flash Action / Scripts So by adding the stop action code it will stop the looping and make your flash run smoother for all, and more enjoyble, Now if you dont know how to do this you can always ask in the flash forums about stop action codes, or even looking up some tutorials with the words stop-action-code.
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