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you do use a lot of gradients :(
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Edit: Been Getting lots of negetive feedback on me mubling in the old version of this so I re-recorded my voice and here you go!
Worked hard on this Flash and it's my first ever. I'm still learning and I hope you enjoy. I saw the My NewGrounds collection and thought it was kewl so I wanted to come up with one so here is mine :D
Edit: This was more of a project to get to know Flash 8 so I can progress and get better. I had to start this over like 5 times because errors poped up durring the making so I got frustrated and sped through some parts and thats why it looks well kinda bad.
nice try...
....but definite room for improvement. first of all the audio quality was pretty bad, and i had trouble understanding what u were saying, and the other thing was instead of using real props, like ur phone, or cash, just draw it straight up in flash instead if u want to keep in tradition of the My Newgrounds trend. over all, i say just keep working hard, and you'll get it eventually ^.^
DeadFlower responds:
thx for the tips... I had problems im Flash 8... like in the middle of making it it would pop up an error message and close out on me and I would have to start it over like 5 times... so I got really fustrated and speed through it. I know it could of been better. This was more of a flash to get to know Flash 8 so I can get better but kudos for the review :D
-DJDF
Cool
it was hard to hear what you were saying
DeadFlower responds:
Not anymore :D
Good
nice flash, but i couldn't hear what you said
Ew.
The problem is, you mumbled too much, and you overused gradients. Better luck next time dude.
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