hmmmmmmmm
it was not bad it could of had a start button at the beginning and replay button at the end.
your skill in animations are pretty good and it would be cool to see more of your work
i give it a 7
Author Comments
I made this little flash animation for a studio that does flash, it's an intro to my demo reel really, let me know what u guys think of it.
Needs some work
The animation of the mouth seems a little off from the voice and movement of the arms isn't quite smooth enough. Work on those things a little more and you animation will improve a lot.
In all honesty
Its not bad, its not great. Putting your phone number on a highly browsed website maybe wasnt the smartest move, but then again, we are lacking the area code ... well?
LucusIce1 responds:
lol yea, i was gonna go and take out the phone number, but i figured since it doesn't have the area code, it's a bit safer
job application?
If this is for your job application, don't you want to put your best foot forward in introducing yourself? No offense, but it's not impressive. The drawing is alright but the animation is just some very minor lip syncing and awkward looking tweens. Personally I think it would look better to just put a still drawing on the screen while you do the audio intro... if this is the alternative..
hmm
needs better voice sync, a more complex background, and some music (although I cant think of what type)