This is my first flash. I made it in my Web class at school. Feel free to comment on it. Give me tips or things i need to work on. Please don't just tell me it sucks. If you're going to say that at least tell me why or just don't say anything at all. Thank You. Please be patiant while it loads. i did'nt have time to make a loading bar or play button. It will show up eventually though.
for a first flash...
It's not the worst I've seen (I can assure you my first flash will suck more). One tip is when you had the helicopter coming in, move the lines you had drawn in the blades between two or three positions, that way it looks more like a heli and less like a picture of a heli. You show the skill to be great, it will just take time and practice. god I sound like a fucking guidance counseler.
!!!
It was action Packed But The Graphics were crap. I say You Should Work Harder
It's my first flash. But the graphics arent the best. If i had more time in my web class it probably would have looked a little better.
This was...
Horrible! You didnt have any action, you also dont entertain the viewers when you watch this! This is just plain boring!
Um this didnt help me much but thanks for your time anyways..
Meh
This video is way to short and hard to follow.
It was in my web class so i was limited on time to make it. Are there any places i can add extra scenes just to make it a little longer though?
Needs work
First of all, the sounds of the helicopter's rotors kept stopping, which would be quite bad for a helicopter. It would have helped a lot to have had the characters actually speak, not just text. The guns left a fair bit to be desired, and using stick figures didn't help too much. But, for a first flash it wasn't horrible, and with some work, you'll soon be producing much higher quality work. Good luck in your future projects.
Thank you. That was very helpfull. I can't figure out how to take out the blank spots of the heli sound. i got the sound off of flashkit. Is there a way i can edit it?