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An Average Day

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-= Kinda asking a favor not to blamm this (not strait away at least) so i can get as many responds with help as i can - thanks. =-

This movie started as my first animation of a man walking (Alot harder than i thought) and i just continued it from there. I wanted to upload it to newgrounds so i could get some reviews/tips on how to make it alot better. I played around with motion tween's abit to make the movie more enjoyable.

Thanks, Zake

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Please help me out by giving me
some pointers on how to make
this movie better and i will do my
best to do so. Thanks

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nice work

i like the movie the end was funny and so was the music

eh... it was ok.

I have 2 things
1st How many waterfalls are so close to a town?
2nd When the rock fell it was kinda slow it would have been funier if the rock fell faster

A Average Day

That was pretty good for a beginner. The backgrounds were creative and well put.
even though it lacked a motive to watch, I thought it was a good movie.

2 little things

1. it would be An avrage day
2. you forgot a ) on the main menu

turn this into a real idea and it could be pretty good, just kind of short and stupid right now

Zakeanator responds:

"1. it would be An avrage day"

Done! =)

that wasn't horrible

the ending gave me a slight chuckle
maybe if you put just a little bit more build up to the ending it would have been funnier
try using a diffrent POV when the guy is walking like a transition to behind him walking or above him
not bad for your first time though

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Score
3.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 3, 2008
10:47 AM EDT