It was far too short.

What you had seemed pretty good, but the fact is that you just didn't have much at all, it was about 10 seconds long and all you showed was a closeup of a persons eye, a dead body on a sofa and at the end a guy hanging, you should have extended the movie so that they'd have been more to it, you should have made the eye creepier so that it made a more striking effect and you should have used some slightly more creepier music, the music was fine but just not quite creepy enough. I'm not too sure what to say about this really as the only thing wrong with it was the shortness of it and the fact that nothing really happened, had this been longer, more eventful and had some story to it, it would have been a great flash.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

its good but.............

it needs a purpose. why is that guy comitting suy.? all it needs a purpose.

hmmm

well i most definately liked it. It kinda scared the crap outta me but that's a good thing. Awesome work. The music keeps you on the edge the whole time. You should make it a lil longer though, i would like to see more :)

not bad

it was okay, a bit random and a bit short, but it was an alright movie.

nice animation - smooooooooooothe

i kinda dont get the concept, nice rain, nice animation, da pplz were draw good, everything looks nice