good for a first try....
its good for a first try, maybe you slow the text down but other wise a good first attempt.
Author Comments
Well here it is, Our first proper flash. Well, the first part of it anyway! Watch and enjoy stickmen in a classroom while not learning Physics. Ha.
UPDATE
Ok, the text is too fast and some of the animation goes wierd. I got that from your comments. Thanks for telling me.
CrystalStars responds:
Thanks. Yes I have to admit that the text is a bit too fast.
Pretty Good
great for a first go but too bad about the writing - way too fast
Wow, that sucked
yeah, well.. sorry, but it sucked. you need a lot of practice.
CrystalStars responds:
It may suck but it is my first Flash so I obviously have a lot to learn.
speedy text
For a stick drawing it was ok, but try to put at least sound in it or slow down the text speed... Its pretty annoying if you are slow in understanding english and you cant follow what he is saying. Best is saying the text yourself and count how long it takes.
CrystalStars responds:
I find sound annoyingly complicated to do. I know how to do it but it allways comes out too long for the timeline. Thanks for the Text Tip!
The text
the text was to fast for me to read some of it. Animation was eh because well... they are sticks :p since its your first flash i wont be to harsh on the rating so i'll give you a 5 because some effort was put into this.