good for a first try....
its good for a first try, maybe you slow the text down but other wise a good first attempt.
Thanks. Yes I have to admit that the text is a bit too fast.
great for a first go but too bad about the writing - way too fast
Wow, that sucked
yeah, well.. sorry, but it sucked. you need a lot of practice.
It may suck but it is my first Flash so I obviously have a lot to learn.
For a stick drawing it was ok, but try to put at least sound in it or slow down the text speed... Its pretty annoying if you are slow in understanding english and you cant follow what he is saying. Best is saying the text yourself and count how long it takes.
I find sound annoyingly complicated to do. I know how to do it but it allways comes out too long for the timeline. Thanks for the Text Tip!
the text was to fast for me to read some of it. Animation was eh because well... they are sticks :p since its your first flash i wont be to harsh on the rating so i'll give you a 5 because some effort was put into this.