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DAAF pt.1

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This is the first part of a flash I am working on. There are two more but rreally it all goes together as one flash, I just want some feedback about how It is going so far.

Review away!

Yeah I know his face is kind of wiggly but it is better than stick figures right?

EDIT, holy crap it is GREEN!

This is awesome!

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Hey, AWESOME!

"Gimmee back the microphone!"

cool dude

i liked it ..the creativity was good too. the fat crayon style was genius as well. great job!

i like it!

the rough, "fat crayon" look works for a lot of animation/story tasks and will work with what you are doing too.

With this age of photorealistic rendering, the STORY to me becomes even more important-

with that said tho, the lipsync needs a bit of work, especially since you do close ups on the face. good start man, keep it up!

Cobellanez responds:

More story to come...come...come...come...

funny

in its own sence

Cobellanez responds:

:D!

First off...

Well, it was an interesting start but I think that you should work on your animation skills a LITTLE more and try again. Nice try though. =)

Cobellanez responds:

I think my animation is better than my drawing capabilities, I really can't draw.

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Apr 25, 2008
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