future advice

you need a preloader, pivot flashes will become very large very fast, so it helps to have a loader so people wont be impatient.

don't resize the gif file once you've moved the movie clip onto the screen. The quality will get destroyed if you do.

the generic white background is tough on the eyes

Take your time on the next one. Don't be get over anxious and throw the next one out so quick. Take your time, and make it look more organized.

I didn't expect you to submit so soon.

Good luck.

Not that good

It was good but kinda plain like just no background also some parts of the action were good but other parts were just awful. The music is also ok so you get a point for that

wtf is this?

crappy grafic+
frustrating music+
slow animation=
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An autenthic piece of shit :D

You can do it better man

could be better

if this actually had a storyline i would have given you a ten however bad it could have been

more frames :o

its decent , but it would be a hell of a lot better if u added a few frames to make the movements not so...plastic...i will give you 5/5 cuz i don't want to see it get blammed and cuz i think you got potential , keep on practicing and maybe watch some tutorials on pivot (youtube)