I'm gonna be nice
Ok. It wasn't "OH SNAP!! LET'S FRONT PAGE THIS RIGHT AWAY MOTHER FUCKER!!" but it wasn't that bad either. The voice acting was clear, but it lacked everthing. It was monotone. And trust me that's not good. I made some movies with monotone voice acting and everyone told me that's what a BIG problem was. As for the graphics, they were decent. They again weren't "OH MY GAWD!!" crap your pants awesome graphics. But I could tell what everything was, and the animation moved smoothly. So this review may sound really weird when you read it so to conclude things I'm just gonna say, keep working and soon you'll have your stuff on the front page. So good job.
-PeteZahut