Interesting enough :)

what it didn't have in one made up for in another. ok graphics but it made up with a funny ploy of what all guys hate and would love to do shoot there ex and give them the revenge they deserve. Your parachute was really good I liked it, the plane should have exploded and even though it kinda reminded me of how a dart hits the dartboard and just sits there. the drawn paintball gun was very well drawn and I'm not into stick figures much but you definetly caught my interest :)

Not bad

This was not bad for a beginner.
But u could have made it more like a animation.
but still great for an nuub.
Keep working and it will get better

hahaha!

i wanna shoot all my exes! fun a little short, wanted more abuse ha, keep trying your great!

Can't help it!

Sorry, but I cannot agree with you: I think this is a pretty darn cool submission and the lack of background doesn't bother me at all!

The main strength is that your man Lulham keeps smiling whatever happens, even while flying his aircraft into a mountain. And rather than ending up all gory, he simply ejects way too late. This kind of humour is definitely awesome IMHO.

The last part turns gory again, which is actually quite a pity. I think most gore on NG replaces well-thought out plots. If you're making another episode, I would recommend using a silly plot or situation as a basis and regarding the addition of any gore as optional ;-)

I think you did a great job!