Well,

Whether or not the bad graphics were purposeful, it isn't enjoyable. I've seen poor graphics presentations before that have been extremely enjoyable. Part of the problem is the extreme flash rate. The text is barely readable. I could kind of understand what was going on because the audio was sort of clear. That being said, keep working at flash. Mind you, I'm not saying that you have poor skills. However, simple things like a play button and a definite end are basic flash movie items. Invest in the knowledge of what great flash submissions look like. As far as humor goes, what may be funny to you (inside jokes) are not always funny to others... Rarely are they ever. I hope to see something else from you in the future. And remember, you are on a site full of ignorant people. You are not always going to get reviews like this and your score will continue to drop. It's a learning process though... Best of luck! I gave you a five on both for the effort.

Not very watchable...

It seemed too fast or something, making it mostly incoherent. It jumped from person to person (although with the bad graphics I couldn't really tell if it WAS different people, or just poorly re-drawn versions of the same people), and from scene to scene. There was little to no animation, which didn't help the scene transitions any. The voice-acting sounded like it was done by pre-adolescents. And you are just begging for reviews of "bad graphics" with your description. You had to have known that... didn't you?

If this is something you may or may not make... I'd suggest you lean toward the "may not".

sucks

you should practise a bit before makeing flash