this first submission...
...is probably the best first submission ivé ever seen! nothing to improve on here, awesome job!
Was good for a first flash.
It needs some improvement tho, on the animation and the drawings.
Some of the drawing looked like you just got tired and rushed it.
But besides that it was good.
Yeah, it got kinda close to the deadline and I was indeed tired.
to be honest, I think this movie deserves a better score!
In terms of improvement, I don't think anyone's first flash could be better! However, if you were to continue along the same story, (perhaps following another subject) - you can only get better at flash!
I think you should definatley continue with this style of flash, can't wait for your second one!
for the first flash you have made this was sweet... refine your style and speed it up a little for chase scenes and so on... good job
one word preloader
other then that i loved it the character design was great
I really think you could expand on the story and make more episodes so that people understand the full storyline
Thanks, good advice.