I can see what you were trying for..
Ok, you have a very artistic mind. The thought process of that was nice. You seemed to know how to work flash, but you don't know how to draw. I couldn't concentrate on your flash with the bad drawings. Whether it was on purpose on on accident, I wouldn't do it again. I have to give you a 1/10 for the lack of drawing skills. I'm sorry, but it looked like a rough draft.
wow, where sould i begin....