Lacking...

This could have been much better. You severely need to work on your writing. This flash bored me, and was not entertaining. You need to make your animation more fluent, bright, and exuberant. Your graphics lacked style, you need to actually draw your own characters, not just loosely trace bitmaps. The length was extremely bad, you need much more effort! Try harder before submitting again. Don't give up!

Very good . . .

. . . but it needs expanding. Keep working on the story line and you will have something really good here.

blargh

it needs a story and more scenes and places and characters you cant just put some random guy kicking a pile of crap and turning green you need more things maybe a couple of ideas and be a little patient will get you farther in animating hope this helps you a little ^_^

artwork has a nice visual style...

artwork has a nice visual style...unfortunately, there was only one frame. really. no plot, no sense in the initial scene either.

All in all, you spent too much time on this, however its not so much the flash you created, but the skills you gained that are important. Although this particular flash is shit, you are not, and will go on to produce brilliant work in the future.

Err...

Who comes out of nowere and kicks a green pile of glowing liquid?