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Author Comments
This is my first flash, so don't expect much. Since this is my first flash, I realize I have a lot to learn, so please leave constructive criticism in your comments, and feel free to give me tips to help me become a good flash animator.
I hope you enjoy my first flash!
Niiiiiice
I loved it, and I think this was amazing for your first flash animation! I liked the unique animation, and the humor was great "IiI hAvE cUmE tO sEeK rEvEnGe, AnD cLeAn Up YeR MESSESSESS!!!" XD
Do you know how to make a replay button? It's quite literally a bit loopy. And I didn't exactly get the ending, so you might want to add subtitles, so I can understand the crazy voices better. All in all, I loved it! Keep up the good work, I would love to see a sequel!
lol
the evil robots voice was really funny...messessess, lol
TerribleScene responds:
Thank you for the review! The messessess line was actually an outtake, but I decided to use it in the final, I think it worked better than the line I wrote.
um....
good try but that um things voice was hurting my head after a while...better luck next time
TerribleScene responds:
Thanks, I'll work on less ear-shattering voices in the next one. Thanks for reviewing!
good movie
i'll agree with fulham and say this is grea t fora first attempt
TerribleScene responds:
Thanks! I really hope my next gets a higher score! Thanks for reviewing!