Sketchy, erasy, black and white fun! [718]
Gotta love the simple visuals here. The black and white scribbles, erase marks... flowing motion... how you turned what was in our POV a piece of paper being written upon... into a sky with stars.... and other such twists in perspective... was quite lovely.
When that huge pink schnozz intruded upon the procedings, the lovely black 'n' white world was shattered, but all good things must end. The colourful things that followed, however, were no match for the B&W beginning. Well done, on the whole... and in the specific, too.