score: B-

when the real thing comes out the graphics should be better and the gameplay must be muuuch longer. if you can do that you can make front page

Hm....

Definetly a lot of potential, just add some more ambient fx and a decent story!

Will be a cool game?

The background story could be a little longer, like 1-2 frames plus. I'm kinda glad you included an escape ending, but I could get out even if didn't search all over the place. Make us search, and talk to a prisoner maybe, get him/her out as well, make it so we cannot escape until we do a final thing, all of the other things leading to that one. (Ok, I guess you've already thought about that) You've made a good framework, now fill it! (PLZ?)

I liked the text boxes, and the navigation, simple and easily clickable. 3/5, but please finish it, don't let the effort fly away. No need to animate stuff this much, just make them interactive. After that animate if you'd like. (Those hanging chains r mad though :-))
Peace

Nice

Very nice demo, I'm looking forward to play the full version. If you want to give it a scary atmosphere (I'm not sure what your intentions are) you'll need some more work on this, maybe a few screamers or at least some scary tunes. ^^ Other than that, thumbs up!

Again?

Once again, I've found myself lost in an unkown place, not knowing where I am, and with no memory to support me! What fun!

As you can see, my feelings towards the originality of this game are, well, negative. On the other hand, the drawings of each room aren't terrible, and the mapping is quite solid. It's just that I get the feeling.... you know what? I HAVE been here before.

Now don't get me wrong, this is a good preview and the game doesn't look BAD, but in no way does it look GOOD. It just seems average to me. But that's the beauty of previews...there's room to improve.