Not bad
Not bad, the animation was alright and the music was good, but like you said the voiceovers could be better and with a nice storyline you could make this really work for you
Author Comments
Apologies for the poor quality voice overs, you will need to turn your speakers up to make them out, ( I recorded them on my phone :P) but please don't rate it bad just because of that, try to focus on the animation, anyway...enjoy! - Jack
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By the way, please could you suggest this for a collection?
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Oh and I forgot, please tell me if you think I should do a series!
Good!
For someone that is 13 y.o. this is a good work. Of course, it could be better but you are young, you'll get better with practice. Keep up the good work! :D
...okay.
Interesting. You might want to work on the sound quality however. It's dreadful.