I haven't really thought up on how to continue this flash, so I made this as the first part of one which I'm not yet sure how far it will go....to those of you who saw my orginal submision, I fixed the sound and expanded on the overall animation a bit, however your probably going to be pissed at the fact that it's not as long as anticipated...
So it's not a very long animation and I couln't
get a play button to work but this part of it is pretty much done, I hope you like it...
I also hope this compensates for the peice of crap animation i submitted earlier today...
You have some talent
The animation is pretty fluid but the sketch-like quality (I'm guessing mouse drawn) of the art puts a dent a nice flash. Also, the story is nonexistent but since this is just a concept it is forgivable. As well, though there were no sound effects, the song fit rather well with the flash. Overall, it is good just needs a bit of graphical polish and literary meat around the start you have here. with that Locke's out.
nice
but not exelent.
try training you drawing skill a bit more.
you have a good imagination and a good style, u're just missing the good animation.
but not bad.
just a question. what was that song? sounds good.
good
lots of action
Interesting
I like your style.
I would love to see you make a action series on newgrounds.
:] keep it up.
awesome
this was great! the only thing that i would suggest is that you put more frames into your animations. but music fit the scenes and it was intense. great job! keep up the great work.