What happened to the animation, I get all black!!!

Great work

funny.

good work really funny. I didnt expect it to be that funny grat job keep it up!

Pretty good.

Could have been longer though, maby add a replay button or somthing.

Interesting...

Not a bad first flash, but it did have quite a few flaws. The intro to it was quite long with quite low quality graphics, if you maybe shorten it a little bit and fix up the graphics a bit, or add a skip intro button you could get around that. The Family Guy audio of Brian's novel was a tad bit.. overused, but the lip synching with the audio was well done.