Thsi was the first ever Flash game I made and I never put it on Newgrounds. I have decided to submit to see what comments I get for it. Personally, I think the introduction movie is the best bit XD.
To be frank...
It wasn't very good. There was no motivation to keep playing, the animation was on the shoddy side, and the game play left a lot to be desired. Work on your flash abilities, increase the size of the game world, create some objectives, give us some enemies and challenges, etc. Maybe the "element" of fun is in order, too.
Ok...let me get this game strait...
Just to be quite certain that I've got this right:
The object of this game is to walk around and collect elements? There is nothing stopping you from doing this. No monsters, no barriers. And even worse, you can fly, so there aren't even platforms you have to hop on to get to it. I'm sorry, but this game seems rather pointless, don't you think? Also, I might add, the walking animation is pretty sloppy. The best part of the game is probably the menu. I don't think you're quite at the right skill level to be posting on Newgrounds. Still, I think you CAN write a good flash game, just practice a bit more first.
no point, again, but if...
it had things like enemies, or traps, or a better walking animation, or a challenge. I don't even think that a few levels are winnable. I tried. It never says that it is the highest score possible.
MEHH
there was no point. No challange, no plot, nothing. Atleast it was better than that clock stuff on here.
Its ok
It was ok, but it needs something to make it more challenging, like a time limit or using the elements to do some crazy stuff to make you go faster or something