Pretty cool...
short but sweet, longer, and maybe some kick ass music and or some stick figures fighting back and you have a great flash.
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hi guys number two has basicallly the same description so i cant be bothered to write it okay
Just enjoy and have a laugh i couldnt put music in but i put more sounds music made flash file size huge so im sorry guys ,'^_^sorry
redrhyn0 responds:
im working on the next one now so i will have music but no sound okays !! i thinks it will be better like that
pretty cool
it was a pretty good movie but i wish it would have been longer
too similar
very similar to the first one, and the sound effects get kinda of repetitive,
what was the first bit about anyway with the talking?
redrhyn0 responds:
it was the guy telling him about what he had to do
Hmm, what to say...
...laughing just isn't one of them.
Here's what I dont' like:
1. The movements of the characters aren't smooth enough
2. One guy killing the entire complex, but not one of those 8-9 guys have a duke-out with the main character?
3. Just what exactly was he infiltrating?
4. Background Artwork needs improvement.
Here's what I do like:
1. You have the load and play
2. At least there was blood, but it was kinda thick.
3. and that's pretty much it
Overall: you need to put more work into this. If you were just spending spare time to goof around on this, then you can ignore my critic. Hope you'll put more work into your future flash bro.
not bad
nice job but next time you should make the animation a bit more fluid and not use the same sound effect evertime he hit somebody
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