its ok
The snail moving sound effect should be changed, but other than that their were no problems.
Although I think it would have been funnier if the snail ate the bird at the end. :)
Author Comments
This is my fisrst flash movie I ever made (and also my first post on newgrounds).
Originaly it was an assignment for school, it didn't have to look like this and we never learned how to animate, so I just opened flash and started experimenting.
(I think i've worked a total of 48 hours at it, I don't know exactly)
I actually liked the result pretty much (for a first flash) and a friend of mine told me to post it on Newgrounds, so here it is.
I don't realy know what to say here, just watch my movie and maybe you can say something for me.
I want to thank:
Newgrounds, for existing
Macromedia, for creating flash
Everyone who has posted great stuff on Newgrounds
Everyone who rates my movie (rate it good please)
myself, for nothing
and so on and so on...
Cool
This is incredibly good for a first flash. Some of the bits in it moved really quickly but o well. i think this could b the first glimpse of a very promising author, keep going!
Hilarious
Everything was great except the animation!
Nice first flash
Altough i didnt actually understand the whole story it was well made and with good graphics.
Hope you have a great future in this site.
nice flash
nice flash it ran smoothly looked alright, keep it up