Ah, my very first flash. I feel as proud as any parent of a newborn... except, you know, without the pain and screaming and placenta. Although if this baby flash had a placenta, I'd totally eat it. Anyway, I won't ask you to be gentle just because its my first flash, because that will bring about the opposite response. =)
Thanks so much to my 'lil brother and co-author, Mixeddrink. Seriously. I still don't quite understand how this all of this twenty-second clip came together.
Lead Animator: MixedDrink
Secondary Animator: Monocle
Art designer: Monocle
Miss Muffet, Perverted Spider: Monocle
Narrator: MixedDrink
Thanks so much for watching in advance,
or maybe not advance?
I hate variables.
was ok
the flash was ok and made me ?chuckle? for a second,
the grafiks are fine, but a little bit background would be nice next time.
and improved animations
the story itself was funny at the end, but could be longer next time.
voices were ok.
i think this one is a good first flash, which should pass without bigger problems, it is better than 90% of all spam-movies and 90% of all so-called first-flash-movies anyways.
so have fun
Thanks very much for the comments and tips. =) Believe me, I appreciate it.