was ok
the flash was ok and made me ?chuckle? for a second,
the grafiks are fine, but a little bit background would be nice next time.
and improved animations
the story itself was funny at the end, but could be longer next time.
voices were ok.
i think this one is a good first flash, which should pass without bigger problems, it is better than 90% of all spam-movies and 90% of all so-called first-flash-movies anyways.
so have fun