okay i guess up to u..
Look first of all it aint horrible... or good i say. i m not being a dick. Well the drawings are horrible and the animtion is to. I recomend for you to practice before you post anything again..
this isn't even my latest flash ;) Check my later stuff before telling me to practice lol.
Fable the Lost Chapters(long review)
i'm really sorry, but hell this look just like that game(well in part one and 2)
first of, in fable the lost chapters, you are a boy who yes helps his dad and all that(same) and saw his parents die in front of his eyes(more same) and was taken in by the heroes' guild (more same but just the name is different) and then his first weapon given is a dam stick(EXADCTLY THE SAME)! and he has a friend he trains with till he grews up(same excepts its a girl and thats it) and all disctricts on this planet is seperated,AND heroes(royal guards) can have quests too.and the only different are is what happens AFTER the first part and there are buidlings, flying cars, a king, ect.
and one more thing, this is very confusing, you're buildings, cafeteria, elevators, even the dam food are like regular today, but your weapons and armor are dam swords and steel armor which is like 1400s? and then the dam flying cars which is like what time 2300????? you mixed dam time together and make it confusing, and ok, yes the fighting is a bit good, but could be better, i mean look up Sonic:Nazo Unleashed, the fighting in that is wayyy much better and yet he has less ratings than your stupid thing
Please write the review once, not on every chapter. It just makes you look like a dick.
its getting beter good job man
Wow, way to end off. That is solid... Only one complaint. Just about the way the people move and their hands lol... Completely wrong but that doesnt matter too much lol. And a 10 just to cap it off 'cuz Mr. King if so fabulous. =-D