I liked it,
The song and subtitles satirized anime in a way I found to bepretty funny. I don't know if you meant to do that, but I enjoyed it.
I'm not a huge fan of anime, well at all really, but I can appreciate the influence its had on your art/drawing.
As said below, you really just need to work on your animation, maybe polish your drawing just a 'little' bit.
Good job n your first one.
Ok, the drawing was quite good, emphasise on "quite" in a good way, but the animation probly need sum work. The song also almost drove me to suicide.
But as for all that "my dream to submit sumthing to newgrounds," i can relate. I submitted something i made ages ago just to say i had submitted something. Kudos, keep on working at it.
E for Effort
I like Anime as much as the next nerd, but this was just painful to watch at parts, either that or it was that song...