nothing new
but that dosent mean a thing when you do it with a noir kind of style, i like it! continue makeing flashes!
Author Comments
This is a project I've been working on for school. The entire think took about 2 weeks. Enjoy.
Edit: The name is like that because the original name was taken, but I had named the movie already. Sorry.
Different concept
I enjoyed this - I like the idea that the entire structure of the world is dependent on that guy hammering that machine. When he stopped working , everything just fell apart and it felt as if the entire universe didn't make sense anymore. When he finally comes back and the clock gets fixed , it was as if nothing happened. Rather, the entire universe regressed in time and undid itself. I expected a happy ending there but I guess that would ruin the movie and not make it as challenging to the mind. Thus, in the technical side I felt like you accomplished alot in just 2 weeks worth of work - imagine what you can come up with 1 month of work! In short, great movie dude! 9/10
My suggestion on your next movie is to be a little more careful when choosing how you want to pace your movie because in some parts I felt as if the movie was rushed while in others I felt as if the scene was dragged on for too long.
lokijki responds:
Thanks for the review. The pacing problems were mainly do to the fact that the movie had to be at least 2 and a half minutes, hence things like the way to long ladder climbing sequence. Then the rushed parts were just to get the movie done by the deadline. Hopefully when I start a movie on my own time it'll have better pacing, thanks for the criticism.
wow
Thats very cool it be be accepted in The collection "Noir" great job
WOW!
Cool and made me laugh. Two thumbs up!
Pritty cool
I thought it was pritty cool.
