Nice!
For your first flash, you seem to have grasped the animation and style very well. 8/10 for its funny storyline and great animation!
Author Comments
This is my first flash animation, created as a project for college. Im hooked on flash now.
cheekyfecker responds:
Thanks Zintata
Nice artwork
The artwork and animation were impressive, especially for your first. The sound did get a little repetitive though, and the ending scream could of had more of a lighter, baby tone to it. Overall, you did an amazing job on your first submission.
Hope to see more from you, keep it up!
cheekyfecker responds:
Thanks Otaso, I was struggling to find sound files suitable for it. will try harder next time :)
Your first flash? Awesome.
For your first flash, it's good! Most people's flash are only stickman flash while yours is not. Overall a pretty good flash. I would have to advise you to improve on your drawing skills, the baby's butt looks abnormally big with the diaper on XD.
cheekyfecker responds:
Yeah i agree, hope to improve my drawing skills and animation skills for next attempt.
hey
Ignore thatoneguy122. this was hilarious dude
cheekyfecker responds:
cheers
first?
Your first flash movie? Damn man, what class are you taking at that college of yours!? They did a damn good job teachin it to you because that was some really good work. My only advice is the same sound bite of the baby laughing over and over got a little annoying and repetitive. Other than that, spot on man! Good job. I hope you mean it when you say you are hooked on flash because I want to see more!
cheekyfecker responds:
Thanks for the support. I found it hard to find sound files. Will make my own next time. Will also work on animation and lip sync.
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