Well.....

Besides the usual no sound, no plot, etc. I'll just say that, with more planning, this could get better.

good for first

it's pretty good for a first so i ope to see you with some more stuff later on

ehh

it was not the worst since it was his first flash
i thought it was ok
but a little short
but all in all good job i guess

ok!

ok, i know its your first flash and im going to try and be as fair as possible,ok? the animation was pretty nice, it wasnt all that handdrawn shit. no music, though...i wouldve liked to heard the mosquito pop like a ballon. also, no comedic value. about 5 seconds of nothing, no laughs, nothing. thats ok, though, because, it is your first! now all you need is a good or funny original idea, no cookie cutter shit, and you could make a potentially good vid or game! lets look to the future and pop out some good shit,ok? if i could give 3.5 ,i would.