well
its ok for your first flash.
you got drawing talent, i can tell.
diddnt realy float my boat, im not to into random humor, but i was laghing at the end.
put in more frames of animation, yes it takes time, but its worth it in the end.
my irst animation was crap. i did it at a friends house and it blew, lol.
so, heres a ten and i wont blam it!
=D