the thing that made it funny was

'the end'. made me chuckle.

funny!

it was too short, but i must say, ist fun! i liked it. you could add more length.anyway, niec music, and good drawings, so its a fine cartoon sir ice

yea ok

umm i think this is the 4th worse flash i have seen on this site. please make a longer one next time and include more movement and a better plot.

Eh..

Not to be mean, but it really wasn't that good. Could have been made much better probably.

Couple of suggestions:
- Make it longer.
- I caught that you made the blood after him beaten up, was miserably done. Although it wasn't seen much so you could tell it was one color. So better graphics.
- Play is spelt, "P L A Y" not "P A L Y".
- End is spelt, "E N D" not "E D N"
- And as someone said that the voice saying end wasn't needed, they have a point. All you need is something saying end, but have credits and music along with it.
- Instead of using "POW" I think you could have done something better. Considering instead of doing that, you could have actually put effort towards making an anime part showing him being beaten up by them. Instead barely any effort was used toward that. I could see if you were going for something funny, but then instead say something like, "At this moment too much violence is going on for public viewers".
- Also the blue clock, looked very badly shaded. You used only two colors it seemed, so either shade it well with several colors, or use a solid color.

PS: Not saying it sucked, saying it could have been done better. Good luck in the future.

ugh.

do you really think that making a 10-second long cartoon and getting your clock friends to mass vote it is funny? does it give you a stiffy when a shitty spam flash by you passes through the newgrounds portal? i hate it when people like you take advantage of this system. people learn that shitty movies by people like you will always pass, so then they vote it up for the protection points.