Not bad for a first flash

If you continued like this you could make a ton of people who go on Newgrounds very happy! I think I'll vote 3 because it did have somthing new: A dinosaur!
And I would like to inform you that the guy below me said the same thing on every other flash so don't pay any attention to him. Go to the Test Run flash a few flashes away from here if you don't belive me.

Im giving u a ten because...

because everyone deserves a 10 on their first try. I hate people who "I don't like it"
"You suck" "No. Try harder"
By the way, it was a pretty good flash for a beginner. :)

not bad, but not that good, either.

it's pretty clear you know what you're doing right now - the movie has, what, 5 songs or so in it? and it's less than one megabyte? excellent job on the compression, especially considering it's also a sprite movie. all you need to do, in order to get better, is just practice. instead of using pre-made art, try drawing things yourself (the tank was a nice, if not out-of-place, touch). the animation was pretty good, but try increasing the framerate a bit and make movements a bit smoother. the tank's movement was probably the worst, and the explosions were pretty lackluster. instead of a fireball sprite, find an actual explosion sprite, and don't just tween it around when there are more explosions. the dialog wasn't that great, but at least you had decent grammar. many first-timers tend to be young, and as such, don't care about grammar. so that's a big plus for you. just make the fonts bigger and easier to read. also, for a more cartoony look, give the speech bubbles a thicker outline of 3-5 px. thinner ones are used for more realistic sort of cartoons.

good luck with your future flash endeavors. remember to not just stick to spriting, though (:

well

it wasnt great but atleast your startting flash

it was awesome

it was entertaining, but maybe just working on luigi walking ( it seemed a lil slow ) and maybe a few othe things, and youve got it set!