This Animation It was alright, It is certainly better than a lot I've seen in my time on this website, and is better then I had expected from this submission, and feeling more lively would have been a major improvement here. Hmm well this was interesting kind of funny and amusing, the sound and voices were really good top notch actually, the animation was not bad either. But anyways with all that said this was a pretty decent flash again had all the elements thats makes up something good and amusing so I was pleased with this, cant think of much else besides that it was pretty solid with me, anyways keep up the decent work. I do look forward to see what you can come up with next, and on that note pretty decent submission here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have a few Recommendations that could make this more improved and better, there is just a few things here and there that could make it better and much improved. so good job so far cant wait for whats up next. But I have to say that this is one of those that may not need any extra touches as you did well here.