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NOTE: There isn't a preloader, sorry about that.

Hello everyone, this is just a short project I did in under an hour. I know it's not very good, but this being my first flash I put decent effort into the making.

I'm not asking you to vote 5, or to vote high ratings for no reason - just vote according to how much effort you think was put into my flash. I'll be extremely happy to see this pass through the portal, but if not, well that's just fine too.

All criticism/comments are welcome! I'll be responding to all reviews!

Thanks.

- Ohanko.

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{{pretty sweet}}

definatley needs some of work though. like the stick figures were drawn all choppy, and the tree needed a little more effort. also, instead of them standing on an island, you should have finished the scenery.

i understand you did this in under an hour, so 3/5 4/10.

hopefully your next submission will be a bit more complete, although this on wasn't terrible.

Ohanko responds:

What had happened with the environment was I screwed up on the dimensions while submitting. I just selected the default size, and after watching realized what I had done. The whole thing was supposed to fit though, not look like crap.

Yeah, it was just a short little something I did, didn't expect anything amazing from this, or for anyone to be amazed. And yes, my next submission will be much better. (I'm hoping.)

Thanks for the review! ;)

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Votes
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Score
2.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 1, 2008
3:31 PM EST