interesting
i have to say that was amazing. i enjoyed it. great work and keep it up=)
Author Comments
This is an old cartoon I worked on 2 years ago. Both companies that I created it for dissolved or moved on to other things, so I've decided to take on the idea myself.
It's basically an urban comedy series based all on this one street called HollaBack BLVD. Now that I have total control of it, I might redesign some of the characters, and even change the name (I wasn't too crazy about HollaBack BLVD, it was only supposed to be a working title until someone came up with a better name.)
So here was the first episode. I might even put some sound to the little promos and put them on my website as well. Anyway, here it is, Enjoy.
Don't rob this store.
Well I'll disagree with a few of the other commentors; I don't think it needs voices. In fact, I liked it without them. It was able to tell a story with no voice work, which is good. I'd suggest, though, perhaps a more complicated plot if there is future work involved. Also, the introduction was slow and almost put me to sleep. :-) Other than that, though, I liked it a bunch.
Snakejohnson responds:
Thank you for the review. Your right that the intro is too long and the plots could be more involved.
Great start.
Good movie but like some others wher saying, voices would have made it even better. Keep up the good work!
I liked it! But...
It was funny and it looked great but sometimes the animation was a bit bad and also theres no voices, the opening is cool but it's too long... and only 1 of those characters was in this flash.. but still GREAT! :)
8/10
Nice concept
I liked the opening sequence and the story for this episode, nicly done. I would have liked it more if there was voice work. It had some places for catchy banter during the fight. Get out the turttle wax and add some more polish and I think you'll have a winner.