great job you did it right!
i mean everyone makes bad looking flashes but you do them in a good way 4501/5
yea you could do better. it was kinda short. plot was good though.
i hate top say this but it was pretty good, the first still sucked though -_-
i cant believe im saying this, but i liked this the story was interesting and im going to watch the earlier ones, work alot on the animation and you could be good.
But, you could animate it to make it a bit more convincing. Not only that, but the text went a little. Could use a little more work.