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My first flash everer

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I did this before i did the collab with TimtheHue!


Omg i was so excited when he first asked me to do some animation


So anyway, this was my first flash i ever did so i hope you like it!

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short but pretty good

you need a bit more of a story and it needs to be longer but it was pretty good. keep working on it and practice your art a lil more. theres some good tutorials here on NG :D keep it up
oh yah and i would change the maturity thing to mild violance atleast ^^;

Keep going

Needs some improvement, but keep making flashes nonetheless.

Trying to help

I'll give ya a 10. I felt like it would help to keep this one from goin to the obituaries, because yesterday i put one on and it died D: so heres to keepin alive.Good job.

ugh,..

random fights? no story..

sorry dude...Animation was pretty good...

but..it was really...random...no story like many ppl said

Wasn't the best but what do you expect?

Nice job for a first flash, just keep practicing and you will get better.

Credits & Info

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4,341
Votes
11
Score
2.36 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 27, 2008
9:22 PM EST