Lol Very weird and funny XD Definitely room for improvement, but really good for one of your firsts :)
I find it funny how they throw their snowballs.
Author Comments
Hello there, my name is Paschal Dooley, I'm an ametuer filmmaker, and this film is my second attempt at making a flash animation.
Orginally this was made for the 2007 DepicT (yes it was written that way) film festival, where filmmakers had to try and tell a story within ninety seconds, so I quickly thought up an idea based the film 'The Quick and the Dead' and just went for it. The film didn't get far in the festival, but I still proud of some of the shots in the movie, although there is some I wish I could some mroe work on (the opening isn't that great to be honest)
Oh and I should mention, because of the moment of times I've been exporting this file (from Flash, to Movie Maker, to Flash again) the timing of the sound is off a second or so, which I apologise for, but I can't fix it.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy this film, and hopefully my owrk will get better from here on in. All feedback is welcome.
Paschal Dooley
This was fun!
Good concept, made me laugh. Presumably the characters were made in Paint which is why they're all circles and oblongs and look stiff (as someone said). If you could loosen them up you'd have a great flash.
Good entry
Sound was good (even if it was off by a few seconds.) and the concept was well thought out. It made a good and entertaining movie. However What I think could make this better it the graphics and to some extent the animation. Perfect circles with hair and clothes, white skin, small amount of shade. The animation was few and simple. Don't get me wrong though, I really enjoyed this movie and think it was great work, a good contribution to Newgrounds.
i like the ending...
But you need them to do over arm arm throws, overwise they all look a bit gay, other than that is pretty good.
Good one!
i serriously loled @ the last part xD xD