Well,

I don't think this is really NG material. Shouldn't it be a flash video of some sort? It's a cute monkey, though. :]

Neat.

First off, I'd like to say it's neat seeing a 3d animation in flash.
To make a preloader, all you have to do is add this actionscript:
First, you need 3 layers, one for the background, one for the play button and percent text, and one for the actionscript. Reserve 4 frames at the start of the animation for the preloader/title screen. These frames will not animate, or play at all after you start the movie. So you should now have three layers with 4 blank frames at the beginning of them. Draw your background, making sure you have a keyframe on frame 5 of the background layer. Turn all four frames of the actionscript layer into keyframes.

The actionscript below goes on each frame in order, to get to the actionscript right click a frame and click actionscript.

Frame 1:
_root.bytesLoaded = _root.getBytesLoaded();
_root.bytesTotal = _root.getBytesTotal();
_root.percentLoaded = Math.round(100*(_root.bytesLoaded/_ro ot.bytesTotal));
_root.percentLoadedText = _root.percentLoaded+"%";

Frame 2:
if (_root.percentLoaded==100){
gotoAndPlay(4);
}else{
gotoAndPlay(3);
}

Frame 3:
gotoAndPlay(1);

Frame 4:
stop();

On the layer for the play button and percent text, make frames 4 and 5 keyframes, 4 so that you can change the percent text to a play button on that frame, 5 so it is starting the animation. On frame 1, make a text box, and put 0 in it. Resize it to wherever you want the size of the text at. Move it wherever you like it. Select the textbox and open the properties window. (Window->Properties->Properties). You should see a little box that says Var: to left of it. This is where you assign the variable that the textbox will follow. In that box put percentLoadedText, which we set to be equal to the percent value loaded earlier. Go to the fourth frame on your percent and button layer, and on that keyframe delete the text box (Make sure frame 4 is a keyframe!) Now draw or make your play button. Using the selection tool, select the whole graphic/set of lines/textbox or whatever you drew, and convert it to a symbol (right click menu). Right click that new symbol, click actions, and add this script:

on (release){
play();
}

That's it. Should work now.

It sort of nice...

However 1. i was expecting a flash animation.
2. there are plenty of other websites for submitting your 3D work.

As for the work itself, Id say it looks solid so far , but get some textures on that monkey.

o...k...

I'm Not Usually Harsh But That Could Have Been ALOT Better

dude

it is like it becos ther is no lodeing!!!