interesting and all
some of your text takes the frustration beyond the cuteness of the movie.
that is to say he seems too angry about it.
anyway, it was pretty decent, and i liked the music a lot. you should probably put the title and artist in the music credits, or at least in your author comments section, because i'm sure quite a few people won't wait till the credits.
anyway, good effort here, you grab a three from me.